Thursday, December 16, 2010

Spring


The golden doorknob opening with my slightest turn of a hand- I'm outside. Green all around me, I only smelling the only the deepest sent of nectar. With every blow that the tranquil clouds give to me, I feel the warm, windy breeze as it makes me shout with glee! Falling upon the soft, moist grass I see colorful patches of flowers, I feel at ease. As if nothing can hurt me and pure peace is at hand. Looking up I can see blue and brown birds, for it is that time of season. Each one going to its nest to feed its young.It pleases me with their sweet tune, as if saying,"Thanks for a season with peace and happiness." I feel like mother nature and I are together. As I turn to the yellow horizon I can finally smell the scent of apple as it fills the air, and I see a pie sizzling in the brisk, hot sun....It is waiting for me. While I'm running, I can remember that this is the true definition of SPRING!

1 comment:

  1. Gorgeous picture! I love your description, but I want MORE! One paragraph seemed too brief - I would have loved you to take me through your actions a little more completely - when did you start running? Also proof-read carefully - you had a few minor errors.

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