All my life I always wanted to save the environment. It has been my life long dream. What better way to start helping the environment then to save the rain forests. Think about how much animals, oxygen, and beautiful habitats you can save. Every single year thousands of trees are being cut down. It's disturbing how many trees are gone. We need to act!
One of the reasons it's wrong to cut so many trees down is because of the animals. Animals live in the rain forest, its their home. Just think how many incredible, phenomenon creatures are living in the rain forests soon to be endangered or possibly extinct. At a pole, about 50% of the animal population are in the rain forests, soon to be extinct.
Oxygen is also a major problem. As we all know no human being can survive without the use of air. Trees make air in their bark and without trees their will only be a limited amount of oxygen. They also breath in the carbon dioxide, the toxin that is bad for the body and the world.
Have you ever been to a forest, seeing those beautiful luscious trees and animals? Well a rain forest is ten times better! The rain forests are wet and dry. perfect for touring and giving those exotic animals a closer look. Though when the rain forests leave there won't be anything to see.
So help the rain forests it will give you a step ahead to helping the environment.Think about how much animals, oxygen, and beautiful habitats you can save. For example exotic animals, fresh air for all, and luscious green grassy forests and radiant rivers in th rain forests. ACT NOW TO SAVING THE RAIN FORESTS!!
I love your goals Shaindle! But again, I need MORE from you! Use the TDCC structure to make your paragraphs strong. Also double check your intro structure - Hook, theme statement, thesis, concluding sentence. I had a hard time determining what exactly I was reading about at first. More hard facts too - it is the best way to get me to believe you.
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