Are you impatient and is disturbing class? Always want to stretch the muscles and dread to focus in class? It probably is because you don't get enough exercise as you should. Mind focus also plays a part, sometimes our minds wander off and then we can't focus in class. WHAT WE NEED IS RECESS!
Exercise plays an important part in our childhood/teenage life.Without it you aren't quite so healthy.Being cooped up in a classroom Isn't the best for getting your body working. We need a chance to stretch our muscles.
Sometimes our minds float off and we can't focus in class. Recess will make sure your brain will wake up! It will also help the teachers too! The students will wake up and get the excitement flowing in learning instead of the usual boredom and wanting to sleep in class.
If you are impatient,disturbing class, wants to stretch the muscles, and is dreading to focus; then recess is the answer. Without recess you might not get as much exercise as you should. Trying to focus the mind is also tough if you try and focus without getting your brain flowing.
I do love recess Shaindle... But you didn't convince me! You need to elaborate on your points - more details and commentary to keep the reader tuned in. This is a good start, but I find myself asking WHY, HOW, and wanting MORE!! Remember, write like I'm a kindergarten student who just doesn't get it. Also watch grammar!
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